Describe a Bedroom
Well, in this bedroom I can see a medium sized bed with a white and red bedspread. Next to the bed there is a bedside table, on it there is a red lamp too. In the right to the bed there is a wood desk and a red chair. On the desk there is a computer and various things for work. Next to the desk, there is a wardrobe, red and made of wood too.
I think the colours in this room are very well combined.
Add more detail to the room essay! No red or white. Use words like cherry, ruby, rosy when describing red... And when describing white use words like pearly, bone white, creamy, and ivory. :D Also, don't repeat words! Especially when describing things that have color... It tends to get boring when you repeat the same words over and over. :) Use similes, personification, etc, to make it more "fun".
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